Changing my inter-titles
The feedback that was given on my trailer from my media teacher is that the inter-titles are too 'wordy'. Because of this feedback, I've decided that I will use her advice and make them shorter. As my trailer is representing a teenage girl who is finding the transition from teenager to adult-hood hard, I want my inter-titles to seem like something my target audience can relate to, or think back to and remember what it felt like for them.
Above you can see a screen grab of my work in Final Cut Express, which shows in the top right corner one of my inter-titles. Relating back to my research on the film 'Welcome To The Riley's' their inter-titles are of a similar variety. To view this please click here, and go to 20 seconds in the scroll bar.
